vox nihili

It's wonderful that he has something to help! I know even the "mild" tics can be very difficult to cope with. That is, when people make a big deal out ...

This is quite good, Lilly. You pulled of the rhyme wonderfully; it isn't corny or awkward, and is delicate. A few edits: "Even it's" It's should be its "pit less ...

When we're little, we stare at people who are different. The lady at the mall who dyed her hair fire-engine red, a guy with a limp, the person with one ...

Hi, Rockstarz. I'm Voxina. I'll give you a review. You have a great piece. The title attracted me as soon as I read it. The flow is quite good, and ...

I know characters are really really hard to let go of... But, I wrote a novel that had ten MC's... and halfway through I realized I had five too many. ...

Top Plot Cliches for me: End of the World That one is very much overdone. Read one, read them all. Also, Robots Take Over World.... blah. Unless you're going to ...

Hi, welcome to YWS! I'm Voxina. Feel free to PM me if you have questions or want to talk to someone. I'll give you a review. First, to let you ...

This was a story I wrote for school. I had to make it pretty short, so this is the full piece. Enjoy reading! ......... Michelle’s Mistake Michelle pulled a jacket ...

Hi, I'm Voxina. I'm here to give you a review. I apologize if this sounds harsh, it's just to help make the poem better... which, by the way, is a ...

Thanks for the review! I wasn't sure about the dialogue at the beginning, but I'm glad you like it. I'll try to clarify some about the transitions between the objects ...

Heart of Ice. I hope you enjoy! It will be continued, of course. ............. “I am going to kill you. I’m going stab you, and watch your blood drip down ...

Hi, Voxina here! I'll give you a review as you ask. Next time, though, don't post just to ask for reviews. It's really spamming, and it takes up the forums ...

To the Star of Ithaka I love I dreamed a dream in time gone by, When hope was high and life worth living, I dreamed that love would never die, ...

Oh! She's cute...or is she supposed to be you? I love the deft shading...can't think of the word to properly describe it...but it really adds depth to her hair. The ...

I'm seeing this become a fast road to semantics... It depends on a person's definition of an "opinion" and their definition of a "fact." In my opinion, that's what this ...